Tuesday, March 29, 2016

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  45. Colombo
Yogyakarta
City Agent
533 Baker Street
USA

Dear Sir/Madam
I’m writing to complain about Rent Price. I have rent here for 2 year and I still believe in your skill. However, I have received a massage 2 day ago that the rent will rice 2 dollar per week and I think it’s too expensive for me.
 
Firstly, the flat is in great need to repair
Secondly, the last rent was Raise 3 month ago
Thirdly, I have been here for 2 year and I am a good tenant.
Finally, if the price is rise. I have to get a Third tenant, And it is make small flat.

 I wish I get good facilities if the price rise  20 dollars per week 

Thank you for your Assistance 
I’m looking Forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely

Sagita Triosa

Hey all. I try to write Complaint letters. What do you think? Please give me your Comment! CMIIW
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  45. Colombo
Yogyakarta

The manager,
Hp Company
USA
Dear HP SIR/MADAM
I wish to complain about the condition of my laptop.
I think HP is the best brand about Laptop. Almost 5.000 Million People in the world use HP product. However, I have  bought a broken laptop from your company.

Firstly, my laptop can’t start up normally
Secondly, I can’t use my touch pad.
Finally, I can’t use wifi in my laptop?

Thank you for your Assistance
I’m looking Forward to hear from you.

Yours sincerely


Sagita Triosa

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45. Colombo
Yogyakarta

The manager,
Hp Company
USA

Dear HP SIR/MADAM

I wish to complain about the condition of my laptop.
I think HP is the best brand about Laptop. Almost 5.000 Million People in the world use HP product. However, I have bought a broken laptop from your company.

Firstly, my laptop can’t start up normally
Secondly, I can’t use my touch pad.
Finally, I can’t use wifi in my laptop?

I wish I get new one as replacement.

Thank you for your Assistance
I’m looking Forward to hear from you.

Yours sincerely


Sagita Triosa

Tuesday, March 22, 2016



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15.RIverside Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5,  2015

Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2

Attention : Costumers Service Department

we are student from Yogyakarta State University. we are new student and need some  Laptop to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?
1.       we need easy carrying Laptop?
2.        could you send us about Laptop Specification?
3.       we only have 5 Million Rupiah,, could you give us some information about laptop that have price lower then 5 million Rupiah?
4.       is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?
5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, Could you give some information about Joystick?

we would appreciate any information you can provide. thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.

sincerely,

Sagita Triosa

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15.Totenham Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5th, 2015

Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2
Attention: Costumers Service Department
We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?
1.       We need easy- carrying Laptop?
2.       Could you send us Laptop Specification?
3.       Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?
4.       Is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?
5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, could you give some information about Joystick?
We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.
sincerely,

Sagita Triosa
 

15.Totenham Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5th, 2015

Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2
Attention: Costumers Service Department
We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?
1.       We need easy- carrying Laptop?
2.       Could you send us Laptop Specification?
3.       Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?
4.       Is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?
5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, could you give some information about Joystick?
We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.
sincerely,

Sagita Triosa