before comment
15.RIverside Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5, 2015
Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2
Attention : Costumers Service Department
we are student from Yogyakarta State University. we are new
student and need some Laptop to do our
task from our lecture. Unfortunately, we
only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some
brochures to help us?
1.
we need easy carrying Laptop?
2.
could you
send us about Laptop Specification?
3.
we only have 5 Million Rupiah,, could you give
us some information about laptop that have price lower then 5 million Rupiah?
4.
is there any discount if we buy more than 1
laptop?
5.
We also lake playing video game in laptop, Could
you give some information about Joystick?
we would appreciate any information you can provide. thank
you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.
sincerely,
Sagita Triosa
After Comment
15.Totenham Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5th, 2015
Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2
Attention: Costumers Service Department
We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a
freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture. Unfortunately, we only have little
information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help
us?
1.
We need easy- carrying Laptop?
2.
Could you send us Laptop Specification?
3.
Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that
have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?
4.
Is there any discount if we buy more than 1
laptop?
5.
We also lake playing video game in laptop, could
you give some information about Joystick?
We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank
you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.
sincerely,
Sagita Triosa
15.Totenham Drive
London.UK NB E3B H9
September 5th, 2015
Computer Service center
BOX 2115
Calgary AB TCJ 3P2
Attention: Costumers Service Department
We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a
freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture. Unfortunately, we only have little
information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help
us?
1.
We need easy- carrying Laptop?
2.
Could you send us Laptop Specification?
3.
Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that
have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?
4.
Is there any discount if we buy more than 1
laptop?
5.
We also lake playing video game in laptop, could
you give some information about Joystick?
We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank
you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.
sincerely,
Sagita Triosa