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15.RIverside Drive

London.UK NB E3B H9

September 5,  2015

Computer Service center

BOX 2115

Calgary AB TCJ 3P2

Attention : Costumers Service Department

we are student from Yogyakarta State University. we are new student and need some  Laptop to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?

1.       we need easy carrying Laptop?

2.        could you send us about Laptop Specification?

3.       we only have 5 Million Rupiah,, could you give us some information about laptop that have price lower then 5 million Rupiah?

4.       is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?

5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, Could you give some information about Joystick?

we would appreciate any information you can provide. thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.

sincerely,

Sagita Triosa

After Comment

15.Totenham Drive

London.UK NB E3B H9

September 5^th, 2015

Computer Service center

BOX 2115

Calgary AB TCJ 3P2

Attention: Costumers Service Department

We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?

1.       We need easy- carrying Laptop?

2.       Could you send us Laptop Specification?

3.       Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?

4.       Is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?

5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, could you give some information about Joystick?

We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.

sincerely,

Sagita Triosa

 

15.Totenham Drive

London.UK NB E3B H9

September 5^th, 2015

Computer Service center

BOX 2115

Calgary AB TCJ 3P2

Attention: Costumers Service Department

We are student from Yogyakarta State University. As a freshman and need Laptops to do our task from our lecture.  Unfortunately, we only have little information about personal Computer. could you send us some brochures to help us?

1.       We need easy- carrying Laptop?

2.       Could you send us Laptop Specification?

3.       Could you give us a list of brochure laptop that have price lower than 5 million Rupiahs?

4.       Is there any discount if we buy more than 1 laptop?

5.       We also lake playing video game in laptop, could you give some information about Joystick?

We would appreciate any information you can provide. Thank you on behalf of the group for your time and assistance.

sincerely,

Sagita Triosa